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By Joshua Foust

Best Defense guest respondent

I appreciate MAJ Erwin's service to our country. But I would also appreciate his portraying my comments accurately. I never claimed to "review" Paula's book (and in fact say very specifically that I did not). While he can proclaim me shameless, I find a certain shamelessness in ignoring 1500 words about Paula Broadwell's many problems with telling the truth, presenting that truth accurately and consistently over time, or portraying her critics fairly.

Rather than focusing on a throwaway line at the end of a long analysis of a small anecdote in Paula's book, MAJ Erwin chose instead to take exception at my donating money to the Wounded Warriors Project with the wrong rhetoric attached to it. That's certainly his right, and he has every right to assume my motives to feel outrage. 

But the decision to focus on such a small point -- literally my decision to donate to an organization supporting wounded veterans so I wouldn't deny them a small royalty check by not buying Paula's book -- while ignoring the much bigger points about Paula's issues with telling the truth is worrisome. Either Paula told a false version of what happened at Tarok Kolache on this blog last year, or she is telling a false version of what happened in her book. The two do not match, and it would serve EVERYONE interested in character and leadership, like Major Erwin, to contemplate that as well.

The real issue here isn't whether I donated to the Wounded Warrior Project with the right motives, but whether Paula Broadwell is telling an incomplete version of the truth to tell the story she wanted for her hagiography of General Petraeus. No matter what people like Major Erwin try to deflect attention from that point, it doesn't change the real issue here.

 

DILNIR

4:54 PM ET

February 27, 2012

Good Grief

Now that was QUICK. And by the looks of it, twas little wonder that I didn't find a book review, if there isn't one. I do think that a link to the article in the response would have been nice. So I'll repeat it :-)

http://registan.net/index.php/2012/02/19/paula-broadwells-dishonest-portrayal-of-tarok-kolache/

 

TOM RICKS

4:57 PM ET

February 27, 2012

That was my mistake

I did the link wrong in the orginal column by Maj. Erwin. (It happened because I sometimes have to use two different e-mail systems, and so mistakenly pasted in the wrong link.)

It is fixed now, but I appreciate you stepping smartly into the breach.

Now everyone can get back to feuding.

Best,
Tom

 

DILNIR

5:05 PM ET

February 27, 2012

Feuding

It does have its charms, in limited doses. Unfortunately these more heat than light shows tend to go on too long. But that may not happen this time.

 

HUNTER

5:36 PM ET

February 27, 2012

All sound...

and fury, signifying nothing?

 

SHARPR

5:36 PM ET

February 27, 2012

There is a worthy debate that

There is a worthy debate that has been had here, but right now Maj. Erwin and Mr. Foust are talking past each other.

Maj. Erwin is reacting to Foust's comment describing Ms. Broadwell's decision to donate proceeds from her book to a wounded vets charity as, his words, a classless marketing scheme.

Mr. Foust is sticking to the point of his post, but neither is he responding to, as he calls it himself, his throwaway line near the end of what he wrote.

A reasonable person might conclude that if a "throwaway line" at the end of 1500 words on a broader point is what got attention, then that "throwaway line" was a mistake by the author. If Mr. Foust's point is the integrity of Ms. Broadwell's portrayal of events, why take attention away from that by muddying the waters with an apparent accusation that she's using a charity as a raison d'etre to sell her book? It's unnecessary.

 

KINSHANE

6:03 PM ET

February 27, 2012

Good point

SHARPR makes a good point. I think Foust made some very good arguments - with good citations/links - but that last paragraph seems unnecessary.

Upon reading MAJ Erwin's post, I was ready to declare Foust a scumbag and false intellectual (haraam!), but after reading Foust's piece, I'd like to see Ms. Broadwell's response before making any judgments.

 

_B_

5:48 PM ET

February 27, 2012

"Can't they BOTH lose?"

-Henry Kissinger (apocryphically)

 

KUNINO

6:30 PM ET

February 27, 2012

A blight on all their houses

There's something unsavory about anybody's boasting publicly about their donations to charity. Same with the idea of insulting a man because you disapprove of which charity he chose to give his money to.

Separately, Mr Erwin's assault on Mr Foust's method of looking through the Broadwell book shows that the concept of the public library is unclear to him. Book reviewers for the major public outlets, of course, usually get the books free, presented by hopeful publishers.

 

TTC

7:06 PM ET

February 27, 2012

Really?

I'm still trying to figure out why I should care about either of today's feud posts.

 

TAENGI

7:29 PM ET

February 27, 2012

i second that

seriously.

 

MAXIMB

5:06 PM ET

March 22, 2012

William, you always state

William, you always state opinion, but never any facts. They hated us since the Carter years! Research the Soviet Afghan War and you'll find why terrorists hate us. Just look at America always protecting Israel adn you'll see why they hate us..

"Is rio orange war always forfait mobile internet inevitable ?"
MaximB

 

Thomas E. Ricks covered the U.S. military for the Washington Post from 2000 through 2008.

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