Sunday, January 23, 2011 - 8:26 AM
After igniting a blogostorm with her first two files, Paula Broadwell charges into the breach once more.
By Paula Broadwell
Best Defense agent provocateurI went out on patrol this week with soldiers from the 1-320th Field Artillery Regiment, the Top Guns, to see the leveled village of Tarok Kalache and check out the new mosque under construction. Individual property stakes were neatly pounded into the ground across the small village site which was about the size of a football field. Afghan contractors were hard at work, having already dug the foundation and established walls for the ground level of the village mosque.
A tent nearby spewed smoke from the stove where the contractors cooked for themselves. Villagers walked by to peek at the construction with curiosity. Children played on the road nearby, circling their bikes, waving at the soldiers, ogling the first female ‘patroller' they'd ever seen in the area. A long line of the cash-for-work villagers, I'd guess two dozen, walked or pedaled their rickety bikes past us as we stood watching the mosque construction make progress.
Perhaps I had a false sense of security, but everyone I passed on the patrol was extremely friendly and happy to interact with the soldiers along the way. In fact, their dusty faces were all smiles. It didn't appear to me, as Spencer Ackerman on Wired.com and others have concluded, "that popular goodwill . . . dried up" after the village razing three months ago. Ackerman writes from the U.S. that he thinks "this property destruction has likely reset the clock on any nascent positive impressions." I would have thought the same until I came here to see it for myself. But with boots on the ground, one can see that the Top Guns' efforts to rebuild and the locals' enthusiastic and engaging response run counter to that.
After my fourth cup of tea with the Tarok Kalache Malik, the elected village representative, I asked him about the villagers' perceptions of coalition efforts, especially those relating to the Top Guns' airstrikes last summer after the Taliban had driven out all villagers. How devastating had that been on their livelihood? I also wondered how the razing of a village squared within the coalition's counterinsurgency strategy. I thought the Malik might present a different story than the U.S. and Afghan National Army forces.
"We resented that the Taliban had taken our village and our livelihood," he responded. "We understand that their control of our village and the use of it as a staging ground for operations against coalition forces was what led to its destruction."
The Malik further vouched to the Top Guns that there had been no civilian casualties during the strike. He knew where all the villagers had been displaced to back when the Taliban pushed them out. I confirmed later this week that SOF team had had eyes on the small village prior to the strikes, confirming that the village was clear of civilians. Top Guns and their "enablers" had gone to great efforts to ensure there were no civilian casualties.
I asked my interpreter to explain the context of my question in a different way to ensure the Malik understood. "You don't blame coalition forces for going after a Taliban stronghold at the expense of your homes?"
"No. We do not harbor resentment against the coalition forces."
"Would you rather we leave? Has our presence caused problems for you?"
"No. We want Commander Flynn to move into our new village with us. We don't want you to leave. The Taliban will return."
The Malik went on to express his gratitude for the Top Guns' efforts to establish security in the area. He said he knew the "Screaming Eagle" patch meant something different. They had helped bring peace to this Taliban stronghold last fall.
When I asked him if he truly believed they would finish the job, he pulled out a piece of paper with the blueprint for his new home, which the Top Guns project officer, Capt. Pat McGuigan, had helped draw up for each of the villagers. "Yes," he said, with conviction. "And the ongoing construction at Tarok Kalache reaffirm my belief," he added.
McGuigan pushed the village elders and the Malik to lead their own effort to divide and claim the land. They had spent multiple days meeting in "reconstruction shuras," drawing and redrawing property lines, using village negotiation mechanisms to achieve a fair distribution that everyone agreed upon.
In light of the Malik's input, the view from the Beltway seems skewed. Ackerman concludes that "destroying Tarok Kalache - in order, apparently, to rebuild it - has meant jeopardizing whatever buy-in local Afghans gave U.S. troops for fighting the Taliban in the Arghandab, which has been the scene of fierce fighting for months." But the village was not "destroyed in order to rebuild it." As stated in a previous post, it was an uninhabited Taliban sanctuary used for manufacturing homemade explosive devices and booby-trapped with IEDs when the air strikes were called in.
Ackerman cites Erica Gaston, an Afghanistan-based researcher with the Open Society Institute, and says that the area is now a "virtual no-go by civilian means because of the security concerns . . . limiting the ability of analysts, including Gaston, to independently assess what happened." It wasn't a "virtual no-go" when we walked there a few days ago, for me or dozens of children, or farmers and other villagers who are part of the cash-for-work program. In fact, without sounding too Pollyannaish, it was a actually a very refreshing walk by the orchards at the foothills of the rugged Afghan mountains. The highlight for me were all the giggly, curious children along the way.
After meeting with the Malik, I interviewed one of the Top Guns' soldiers who fought to secure the area near Talok Kalache. Sgt. 1st Class Kyle Lyon was awarded a Silver Star for his valorous efforts to lead his team on a dismounted assault through this area. Months ago it had been littered with IEDs roughly every 60 meters that had taken the lives and limbs of over half dozen of his team last fall. On our patrol that day, I had passed the point where Lyon had helped to gather two legs and an arm belonging to a platoon member who had stepped on a pressure plate IED on a shaping mission prior to the Tarok Kalache strike. It was the same area we freely walked through on our hike today as villagers. I was moved by this soldier's ability to soldier on and maintain his dedication to the mission after such a tragic fall.
Lyon is now engaged in this reconstruction work to "hold and build" the village. Lyon told me that in the days after contractors had begun reconstruction at the village site (a month or so after the razing), several hundred villagers per day began to pass by the combat outpost established there to maintain security. They were thanking Allah for these efforts, the translator told me, as they begin to return to their farms and orchards. Some of them had not felt safe enough to farm in this area for twelve years. Clearly, they apparently felt safe enough the past month or two.
Rather than simply disperse bulk cash compensation funds, the Top Guns have decided to oversee the reconstruction in Tarok Kalache for several reasons: to ensure accountability in the spending of funds; to demonstrate tactical success and make sure the village was rebuilt before they leave the theater, and to try to help the people return and establish their defenses before the new fighting season begins.
What has happened in Arghandab during this "build" phase is not unique. There are additional places in Kandahar and Helmand provinces where other battalions have forged good relationships with locals and have begun building efforts and measured similar signs of progress. Every mature Special Operations Task Force Village Stability Operation site in the theater (to be discussed in a forthcoming blog) exhibits similar cooperation amongst Afghan villagers, local leaders, ISAF and ANSF partners working together.
In the Arghandab and elsewhere, the Top Guns measure progress in their area with a few salient and telling indicators, among them: the frequency and density of farmers returning to their fields, the increasing number of weapons caches exposed by villagers, and the number of Afghans applying for cash-for-work programs, the tips given to ISAF and ANA security regarding Taliban activity. Between 600 and 800 villagers now show up each week on the west side of the Arghandab to receive cash-for-work to improve their communities. The improved roads connecting the villages, and the flow of water through new canals which were built by the cash-for-work efforts is also illustrative of their efforts. It also refutes the bloggers who claim that goodwill by the villagers has dried up. Quite the contrary, at least in this village. (See OPSUM's graph on enemy activity trends.)
Gen. David H. Petraeus's counterinsurgency guidance calls on coalition forces to be first with the truth. So truth be told, U.S. forces use air strikes. Air strikes cause destruction. They are most often and preferably a means of last resort; and in most cases, as in this one, require eyes on the target to confirm no civilian casualties. All true. But another truth is that they don't necessarily lead to setbacks in the operational design or overall strategy. In fact, my analysis would be that the Top Guns have achieved a small victory here -- clearing the Taliban sanctuary, setting the conditions for the return of the villagers, providing them with a sense of security and stabilization, expanding the inkspot of security in the south, and exhibiting coalition and Afghan partner forces' commitment to the mission. An additional truth is that it is too early to tell if this small tactical victory will lead to a strategic success. But it is certainly a stretch to deduce that it has harmed the overall COIN effort.
Paula Broadwell is a research associate at the Harvard Center for Public Leadership and author of the forthcoming (Penguin Press, 2011) book, All In: The Education of General David Petraeus. Because her idea of a good time is riling up Josh Foust and Spencer Attackerman, she will be blogging from there through February, or, who knows, maybe March.
I don't know if Ms Broadwell works for the Pentagon/CIA or is just a dupe.
If just a dupe, ask yourself these questions.
How do you know this guy was elected from that village, or even lived there? Do you speak the local language? Did you hire your own outside interpreter, or did you trust the one from your local Pentagon spinmaster, who escorted you and told you who to "speak" with and what they said. "Yes, thanks for destroying our homes, they were old anyway."
The Taliban (a CIA created name for local insurgents) are not good guys, but they aren't Arab terrorists, just traditional opponents to foreign occupiers. They view local collaborators as traitors, and the locals are stuck in between. I suppose if you visited Nazi occupied France, you'd do a story about a local Frenchmen saying it was good the Germans destroyed their village, because it was infested by members of the French resistance.
This ruse was common in Vietnam, and on every military base in the USA. You just find a passive stenographer having a great time overseas who will write down whatever you like. If you want to be a real reporter, you must risk your life like Nir Rosen and strike out on your own.
If the American officers there didn't hate you when you left, you failed.
Wed Oct. 27, 2010 2:00 AM PDT
In his new book, Aftermath: Following the Bloodshed of America's Wars in the Muslim World, journalist (and Mother Jones contributor) Nir Rosen presents a visceral portrait of the wars in Afghanistan and Iraq. He's embedded with GIs and jihadists, hung out with Afghan "stoner cops," and has had some close calls, like nearly being dragged before a sharia judge who might have sentenced him to death. In this excerpt, Rosen reflects on his recent experiences in Afghanistan and the prospects of American counterinsurgency efforts in a country with a long history of unsuccessful occupations.
Supporters of General Stanley McChrystal, the former US commander in Afghanistan, liked to say "he gets it," as if there was a magic counterinsurgency (COIN) formula they'd discovered in 2009. But Afghans have a memory. They remember, for example, that the American-backed mujahideen killed thousands of Afghan teachers and bombed schools in the name of their anti-Soviet jihad in the 1980s. The Taliban atrocities had not arisen in a vacuum. Similarly, past American actions have consequences. Opinions were already formed. The Taliban were gaining power thanks to American actions and alliances. Warlords were empowered by the Americans. No justice was sought for victims. The government and police were corrupt. The president stole the elections. The message was that there was no justice, and a pervasive sense of lawlessness and impunity had set in.
Afghans who had been humiliated or victimized by the Americans and their allies were unlikely to become smitten by them merely because of some development aid they received. And the aid was relatively small compared with other international projects, like Bosnia, Haiti, Rwanda, and East Timor. The Americans thought that by building roads they could win over opinion. But roads are just as useful for insurgents as they are for occupiers. The Americans had failed to convince Afghans that they should like them or want them to stay, and they certainly had not been convinced that President Hamid Karzai's government has legitimacy. You can't win hearts and minds with aid work when you are an occupying force.
The Taliban was the most obscurantist, backward, traditional, and despised government on earth. The fact that the Taliban was making a comeback was a testimony to the regime that the U.S. set up there, and to the atrocities that have been committed in Afghanistan by occupation troops and their Afghan allies. It was sheer arrogance to think that adding another 30,000 or 50,000 troops would change the situation so much that the occupation would become an attractive alternative.
There was little evidence that aid money in COIN had an impact. There was not a strong correlation between poverty and insecurity or between aid money and security. The more insecure you were, the more development money you got. The safer provinces felt as if they were being penalized for not having Taliban or poppy cultivation. The aid system raised expectations but didn't satisfy them. Life remained nasty, brutish, and short for most Afghans.
Aid and force do not go well together. The Americans assumed that material goods superseded all other values. This was not true in Iraq or Afghanistan. Positive as the aid was, it did not outweigh the civilian casualties or the offensive and humiliating behavior of the past eight years. In Iraq it took the trauma of the civil war to make the Americans look good. There might have been a new administration in Washington, but for Afghans it was the same America: the America of Iraq, Afghanistan, foreign occupation, Guantánamo, Abu Ghraib—the America seemingly at war with Islam.
The Pentagon propaganda machine, for instance, turned Marja from a backwater to a key strategic city, and the American media accepted it. But in fact there were only a few thousand people living in Marja. It took months and thousands of troops for the Americans to seize Marja, only to learn that the Taliban were popular there. And there were up to 20,000 similar Marjas throughout the country. In Marja the Afghan National Civil Order Police too proved a failure, incompetent and dependent on the Americans. Fighting remained frequent.
The storming of Marja was meant to be the first sally in a larger campaign to expel the Taliban from their southern heartland, especially Kandahar. The Americans thought if they could wrest it from Taliban hands, then it would turn the tide against the Taliban. But Kandahar meant little to anybody who wasn't a Kandahari. It was part of the same focus on population centers that were overwhelmingly urban.
Violence was getting worse. How long would the Afghan people accept the presence of armed foreigners in their country? Even a message of help can be humiliating, more so when it is backed by a gun. The Americans underestimated the importance of dignity and the extent to which their very presence in Afghanistan was deeply offensive.
In May 2006, riots erupted in Kabul after a road accident with American forces, and the Americans shot at the crowd. The episode revealed an underlying anger that could explode at any moment. In September 2009 a British plane dropped a box of leaflets that failed to open, landing on a girl and killing her. Given that most Afghans are illiterate, it would not have been any more persuasive had it opened. Folk poetry throughout Pashtun areas of Afghanistan is now often anti-occupation. Below is one recent ghazal (poem), by a woman called Zerlakhta Hafeez:
Oh Afghanistan, you are my love
You are my soul, you are my body
They want peace while having guns in their hands
That's why all the children are dying for you, Afghanistan
Your children are dying for you because they want you
To be sovereign, to be independent like they did before
Pashtuns from both parts of the black line [the border with Pakistan]
Call you their home, oh Afghanistan, so they fight for it.
Americans lacked the political will for a long-term commitment, regardless of whether it was right or wrong. The Americans would bail on Afghanistan in a few years no matter what. It would be tragic if it happened now or in a couple of years. There was no way to "fix" Afghanistan. According to Andrew Wilder, a longtime aid worker in the country, "It may be more realistic to look for ways to slow down the descent into anarchy." The Soviets never lost the war in Afghanistan. In fact, the puppet regime they installed had pretty much crushed the mujahideen until the Soviets withdrew support. The Soviets won their last battle in Afghanistan. But it made no difference. Only ruins and a few Russian-speaking Afghans remained in Afghanistan.
The Americans too weren't losing, stressed a retired American military officer working on security in Afghanistan. "Every time our boys face them, they win," he said. "We're winning every day. Are we going to keep winning for twenty years?"
Excerpted from Aftermath by Nir Rosen, to be published by Nation Books in November 2010. Copyright © 2010 by Nir Rosen. All rights reserved.
Nir Rosen has covered the Middle East and Afghanistan for publications including The New Yorker and Harper's. He is a fellow at the New York University Center on Law and Security
August 2010 Arghandab story shows vastly different situation
It is true that the tactical situation throughout Arghandab has changed drastically since mid-summer 2010, when the Combat Outposts (COPs) in the district were getting hit every day multiple times, and when patrols as few as a hundred meters south of the COPs—in the direction of the river, among the thickly vegetated grape vineyards and pomegranate orchards—meant certain casualties from underground IEDs.
Here is the story I wrote after spending much of August 2010 with Alpha Battery of the 1-320th, one of the batteries under LTC Flynn's command:
http://assignmentafghanistan.org/story/another-day-dab/article
I still keep in touch with the guys from Alpha Battery—who used to refer to the daily repelling of Taliban fighters from COP Nolen as "defending the Alamo." Back then, flying metal streamed toward COP Nolen all day long, in the form of RPGs, recoilless rifle fire, mortars, AK-47, and heavy machine gun fire. Now, it's astonishingly calm by comparison—the guys tell me they rarely get hit anymore, and that they are now able to patrol clean down to the river without incident, to a town called Laden Tabin where they've set up a new patrol base to interdict Taliban foot traffic in the green zone. They've linked their positions with the unit on the other side of the river to put a tactical roadblock in place, and it makes sense that the fighting is down as a result. There are four times as many troops in the area as there were just this time last year, when Afghan National Army troops are included; the ANA and US Army are a regular presence now in places where they hadn't been seen for years.
Many of Arghandab district's villages were entirely deserted as of last summer; the entire country has a huge crisis of internally displaced persons (IDPs, internal refugees), and Arghandab district is one place like so many others afflicted with Taliban infestation and coalition occupation that has generated a lot of IDPs. Before the fighting calmed down—as a result of units like 1-320 cleaning house and seizing key terrain—villagers simply could not farm their land in much of Arghandab District. It was too dangerous; too many IEDs in the ground, too much crossfire, too much harassment from the criminal gangs running drugs, weapons, and personnel through the valley on the way to Kandahar City and Helmand Province.
Now that things are calmer, villagers are moving back in. This was part of the grand plan. This is the fruit of the human terrain campaign. Will it hold up when the next unit comes in? I don't know, and neither does anyone else. Will it withstand the American pullout or drawdown? Again, no one knows—but it seems reasonable enough that enhanced security has purchased enough confidence among Arghandab's IDPs to encourage them to move back in and get their farms running again. Should LTC Flynn get the credit? Does it matter?
Only a dedicated naysayer would attempt to completely contradict the evidence, or assume that people in a place as violent as Afghanistan would be unable to make decisions that seem utterly bizarre to us, sitting where we are in our peaceful and warm living rooms. Yes—in Afghanistan, people who have had horrible things happen to them make decisions motivated by self-preservation and self-interest to forgive US forces, to forgive Taliban, and a huge array of other seemingly counter-intuitive decisions. They also backtrack on those decisions, switch alliances, betray allies, etc.; the ultimate goal is self-preservation, and that impulse may cause Flynn's new alliances in the Arghandab to crumble at a moment's notice in the near future. We simply can't know.
Thanks for the further insight ELLIOTT.
My initial thoughts on the destroying of Tarok Kalache was one of reservation, but after shooting my mouth off, your further explanation today, and on the 21st, as concerns the ghost towns within this area, shed a bit more perspective.
However, I am curious if a detachment of the same soldiers for continuity and working relationship are going to live 24/7 among the village? Additionally, and importantly: there is daytime activity. . . .then there is nighttime goings-on. Are these Soldiers good at night and comfortable with pushing-out aggressive night ambushes, since if Broadwell's observations are correct, they should be getting good input from the villagers?
TYRTAIOS — during my time in Arghandab, the Alpha Battery guys were sending out "small kill teams," or SKTs, almost every night. They would use psyops loudspeakers to rattle the cages of Talibs moving around at night and try to provoke them to attack the COP, then the ambush team would spot them and take them out. I know that this method worked on two occasions shortly before I arrived at Nolen; the suspected enemy losses caused by one of these SKTs were high enough, the battery commander thought, to have dissuaded Taliban fighters from moving in the vicinity of COP Nolen at night, period. I went out on an SKT on one of my first nights in Arghandab and did not see any movement at all. I also went on an overnight mission with Alpha Battery to the nearby village of Nur Muhammad Kalache—the one described in my story "Another Day in the 'Dab," and visually detailed in the video I produced by the same title (see the link in the previous post)—and the guys set up an SKT on the rooftop of a compound in NMK, expecting to find a cell of Taliban fighters, and they found nothing.
The Taliban hit hard shortly after the sun came up, however. Similarly, there was no activity at night during the mission to NMK—it seems that the Taliban were well aware of the US troops' natural advantage at night, thanks to Apache gunships, Kiowas, Spooky, and NODs, and they just didn't test their luck in the the dark. But they were very aggressive during the daytime and came within 50m of the US positions.
Now it seems that 1-320 and the battalion across the river have effectively stretched themselves across the Arghandab's green zone in such a way that they can more easily patrol the main access routes and keep them free of IEDs. Then again, it is winter, and things may change once the mountain passes from Pakistan open up, the opium cash from the spring harvest starts flowing, and the hardcore fighters begin returning. I don't see how the calm can be sustained at its current level; things sound too good to be true, though that doesn't mean they'll be as bad as they were last summer. There is truth to the summer "fighting season" concept, and I suspect that has a lot to do with the fact that the fighters get their money from the opium trade and its not in their interest to make farming and transport of narcotics untenable due to fighting along the smuggling routes and on the farmland during the harvest season. I'll be looking into that question when I return to Afghanistan in a week.
The question is not whether US forces will keep up the momentum in Arghandab—I am sure they will. It's not nearly as big a place as it sounds, in terms of width; from a guard tower on any COP, you can easily see from the desert fringe of the "green zone" clear to the mountains on the other side of the river, and you could walk the width of it easily in an hour if you weren't worried about stepping on IEDs. The real question is whether the Afghan National Army will keep up the momentum when the US starts to draw down. They've got a LONG way to go before they are able to handle security operations on their own. Moreover, there is a high likelihood that—left entirely alone—they would make deals with the insurgents and criminal smuggling networks to protect their own skin, live and let live. Who knows, certain commanders may even stick a hand into the opium trade—after all, everyone else has. Afghanistan is the second most corrupt country in the world, according to Transparency International; no small number of government officials at the highest levels are linked to the opium trade, bringing their interests and the interests of the insurgents—that narcotics smuggling routes remain open—into perfect harmony. So far the ANA has a reputation of being less corrupt than the Afghan govt., but there's no reason that couldn't change in the absence of oversight from Coalition commanders.
All of this is to say—even if things ARE better in Arghandab, which by all measures they are, that doesn't mean the war is anywhere near over, or even that we're fighting to right enemy.
A very helpful post, thank you. Considering the uncertain outcome of the whole project, do you think it worthwhile?
ELLIOTT WOODS' REPORTING IS WHAT WE NEED
Like a few NY Times reporters, Mr. Woods gets down on the ground and stays there. He does not sound like a tourist. Based upon his extended stay, he seems to sum up the situation very well.
There are more boots on the ground. The tactical disposition is better and population-centric. The Taliban appear largely to have withdrawn. The people are returning to their routines because of the improved security situation.
But then, Mr. Woods makse the key observation: when we leave or draw down, the people may very well make deals to their perceived advantage. They may become involved in the opium trade or buy-off the Taliban because that is the easiest way to survive. 128 Army Special Forces and some CIA personnel didn't fight their way to victory with the Northern Alliance. They fought and dealt their way to victory. People on both sides were bought. The Taliban often was allowed to withdraw by mutual agreement and bribery. People were offered the opportunity to switch sides (in the face of accurate airpower) and did so with alarming regularity. I doubt that these mores will change.
When Elliott Woods returns, I hope that he will further examine this facet of Afghan behavior. It could help us understand whether or not we are wasting our blood and treasure.
Good luck Elliott Woods.
Well, if Paula Broadwell’s breathless reporting is correct then all is right with the world and we can anticipate a shinning success in Afghanistan. For a minute there I thought we might have been stuck in the proverbial Afghan tar pit but fortunately Ms. Broadwell has cleared things up and put those fears to rest. Now onto Iran!
JPWREL, it's all good man, it's all gonna work out, be breezy dude - no worries!
It is obvious our aventurier, Mademoiselle Broadwell, relishes her assignment and writes with much gusto, but she is no Dicky Chapelle, who carried a K-bar. I hope she fair's better also: www.suite101.com/content/dickey-?chapelle-covers-vietnam
Heard about her but never knew the details of her death. Tough cookie and seems to have been ‘adopted’ by the Marines. Reminds me a little of Sean Flynn who’s grave as I understand it has recently been discovered in Cambodia.
Dickey was indeed beloved by the Marines in the field going back to her photos from Iwo Jima. And, if one choses to view her Wickipedeia entry, she carried more than just a K-Bar and cameras to the field. It looks like the early Mattel product that she has slung in the accompanied photo on Wicki.
I believe that this all begs the question of objectivity of those who report from the field, their personalities, and their skills. From the Blavefive blog (http://www.blackfive.net/main/2011/01/behind-the-uncle-jimbo-in-combat-series.html) there seems to be a rather brutal verbal fight with blog authors and readers and Mr. Michael Yon, a rather prolific chronicler of both OIF and OIF. Some have labeled Mr. Yon as a modern day Ernie Pyle while others question the very basic character of the man.
Do we really know Ms./MAJ Broadwell's objectivity in the current reporting? I think this is more than curiousity, some of us have the perverbial skin in the game in that same AO that she reports from. In this instant info world, I don't wish to wait for "history to be written" to ascertain what is factual from the front vis a vis what is fluffbunk.
why the snark and condescension
Why the snark and condescension in Broadwell's author description where she says this about herself:
"Because her idea of a good time is riling up Josh Foust and Spencer Attackerman, she will be blogging from there through February, or, who knows, maybe March."
It does all seem to be like a game for her where cheerleading and poking fun at the non-cool kids (you know all of us pogues back here who don’t know the truth from being on the ground like she and dare to question or criticize) and she seems from the tone and vibes of her posts to really enjoy it all.
gian
Gian,
Please don't put that phraseology on her--I am the one messing around with the author ID.
Though I am inclined always to defer to the one on the ground.
Thanks,
Tom
As a piece of journalism, this trifle is painful to read, but Paula Broadwell doesn't deserve the personal scorn that has been heaped on her.
She's bright, sincere and committed to trying to tell a story, and we shouldn't necessarily assume that it's merely IO.
But we also shouldn't let her perspective stand. It needs a great deal more empathy for all sorts of people and injects too much bias, but it's also difficult for young reporters (for lack of a better description of her profession) to ply their trade in public.
If she's serious about the work, she probably should desert the blogosphere and concentrate on perfecting her newfound craft with real editors.
If I wanted to read feel good stories written by currently serving field grade officers, I would go to the ISAF home page and read press releases. It is difficult for me to take any of MAJ Broadwell's writing seriously, considering she is about to release a book about General Petraeus' rise through the ranks. Her work reads more like that of an Army PAO, not blogger, scholar, or any other title that could be applied. I can only wonder who is covering the bill for this little excursion.
She's just one of many flacks who have been cheerleaders for anything the US military does.
Maybe there is some truth to what she writes, but her stupidity and snark, as related by GIANGENTILE makes it difficult to take her seriously.
Ten years from now when historians are going over yet another disastrous American foreign adventure will she admit she was wrong or will she and up like Bill Westmoreland and the revanchists?
can I understanding human terrain, without noting the features?
Ms Broadwell describes an interview with a village malik, without naming his tribe (Pashtun?), the language used, the origin of her translator, or whether ANSF persons of whatever ethnicity (Tajik?) were present. Huh.
Is she uninformed on these matters, thinks they are unimportant, or simply thinks the reader is uninterested? My understanding is that the Taliban is overwhelmingly Pashtun, and the ANSF is led by Tajik officers, communicates in their dialect of Farsi. I also have heard that villages of different ethnic makeup become checkerboard in areas; a mainly Hazara village might have a completely different reaction to Taliban or ISAF forces than a Pashtun ville.
As a thought experiment, cast this in an American context:
Let's say I witness Col. Kit Carson, using native Pueblo or Ute scouts to translate an interview with a Navaho clan leader. Knowing that the translator's tribes have engaged in lethal slave-taking wars for hundreds of years with the Navajo, that Carson's spanish wife 'employs' Navajo slaves, that might inform my observation, no? Am I aware that any conversation with Navajo that doesn't begin with both paternal and maternal clan deliniation is off to a poor start?
Analysis/reportage of the anti-Taliban campaign that speaks of human terrain, without ANY mention of Pashtun, is rightfully suspected of blowing smoke up my skirt. Ms Broadwell is supposed to be doing graduate level research over there, isn't she?
The US always falls prey to the Gatekeeper/Chelebi effect. I think senior policy makers are aware of this and don't care so long as it advances policy interests. Yet further down the trough, well-meaning, dare I say naive, folks don't quite get that extra friendly, helpful translator or informant might have his own tribal/familial agenda beyond the immediate concern of being friendly to the relatively large foreigner with a large gun. To a certain degree the US Military has recognized this as a source of errors in the early going in Afghanistan, but the issue remains. The problem is, by using ethnic and religious minorities for imperial projects they are invariably marked for payback when said external power leaves. Folks on this blog are more knowledgeable than me, but isn't some of the anti-Christian animus in Iraq due to the fact that the local Christians were very "helpful" for the US?
Regarding translators and Pashto vs. Dari speakers, the problem is there aren't enough Pashto interpreters as opposed to Dari. Moreover, Pashto isn't a single language, I've Afghan acquaintances, native Pashto speakers, who've told me that they can't easily understand some of the rural people. So the US is overly reliant on ethnic minorities or outsiders (regionally speaking), and when they can get a local who speaks the language, he usually is urban, has poor translating skills, is primarily concerned with a green card, and potentially can't converse with rural people in any meaningful way. I'd imagine this problem is more of an issue in the East.
Someone here referred to her as Major Broadwell. That makes sense since this is an obvious political PR article designed to fool people while helping General P cover up an embarrassing event. However, this is not is her byline, and Mr. Ricks did not make note of that. Why? I googled and learned she is a West Point grad who makes money off the counter-terrorism racket and is a U.S. Army Major. I'd guess the U.S. Army paid for her trip, where she earned money for reserve duty, plus combat pay and all those campaign ribbons for breathing Afghan air.
Come clean Mr. Ricks. Have you been caught (again) deliberately attempting to deceive your readers with BS? You knew she was an Army Major but didn't think it was important while she pretends to be an independent outside observer. Will you apologize for this deception, or were you fooled by her too?
Tom doesn't need me to defend him....but really...? This line from you CMeyergo?
"Come clean Mr. Ricks. Have you been caught (again) deliberately attempting to deceive your readers with BS?"
When you are so quick to justify your own rants by linking to...your own website rants? Repeatedly? Without attribution? Please thou protest too much.
BTW, Ricks has posted Broadwell's comments here bylined as a MAJ before. Obviously she operates in many different modes - when her byline justifies the title I am sure he will include it. Most serving officers who are writing for their own purposes are smart, and appropriate, to not include their rank, as good COL Gentile has noted here before.
Outstanding points WALKING WOUNDED.
But this is a bit of rah-rah PR, not a serious analysis. Hence the breathless, pseudo-descriptive feature-story journalistic style. It isn't a serious attempt at analysis or description.
What is clear is that EVERYTHING is much more complex than us simplistic (stupid perhaps?) Americans want it to be which is why our pols are doing such a good job of formulating serious policy on this stuff (and a lot of other important issues as well), NOT.
Along with being complex, all conflicts of this nature are LOCAL. Your post speaks to both points. Maj. or Ms. or whatever she is Broadwell is doing her best to bypass both obstacles to a clean, attractive puff-piece.
Along with her previously mentioned snarkiness, the whole thing strikes me a an adolescent effort. I'm surprised that Tom takes this drivel seriously.
Even in "conventional" wars things are complicated and local. For example, the political minefield of the French maquis in the latter stages of WW II. Not taking into account the internal issues within the organizations, who was a communist, who was a conservative, etc. means that one never gets a reasonable understanding of WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED.
The same holds true in Afghanistan, except that I have the depressing sense that it's on purpose; use the KISS principle and maybe we'll be able to sell off some of these sows ears!
I'm sorry, but the quotes from the elected village chief are simply not credible. Who has the PHD in English, Mr. Malik or the interpreter? It really does read like typical Army PAO pap. It destroys the credibility of the rest of the Major's story.
Also, LTC Flynn placed this all in perspective when he stated that only 4 of 38 villages were creating a self-defense force. OK, how many villages are undergoing this type of development work? Only those we smoke?
MAj Broadwell quotes civilian trepidation about traveling through this village and then says, however, that she can as though she were a civilian! She remarks that villagers find the presence of a female "soldier" unusual. Well heck, then I guess that she is not a civilian. If they think she is a soldier, I imagine that she is in BDUs, armor, and carrying a weapon. Do ya think she's walking alone?
This "reportage" is an embarrassment and I fear that her book on General Petraeus will not serve him well. Her Harvard graduate adviser should be ashamed.
She and Nir Rosen are well-matched - neither appears to deal in the facts.
Are these erroneous times ascribed to our comments actually GMT instead of ET?
The time stamps for the comments are five hours ahead of U.S. Eastern time. We don't yet have a fix, unfortunately. Thanks for bearing with us.
--FP copy chief
Answer to 'no CIVCAS' warantee
Our guest contributor answered my question (raised in an earlier posting), how the 'no CIVCAS' statement could be made with certainty. Answer: Expert full-time military observation confirmed local authority's statement that he could locate all his people outside the kill zone, where the Taliban had militarized the structures. As described, it's war, but in no way a war crime, NOT indiscriminate.
For ansering that, and for putting it out their in the first place, I thank the witness to my country's war, Col. Flynn also, and hope the HT issues I raised above may also be addressed, in due course.
As a strictly literary issue, I 'got' the 'voice' on the first installment. It's not the one I would choose, but in a way it's fresh and unselfconscious. If the report talks in a corporate newsletter sort of way about warfighting, maybe that's how the team sees itself. I'll take accounts from a true believer with eyes on, over long rants from the peanut gallery seats, where I sit.
Propaganda and truth deception
I have been saying for over a year that Mr. Ricks is running info ops for the pentagon. Do we need anymore proof? I am glad to see that some commenters are starting to realize the game Mr. Ricks is playing. By publishing garbage propaganda from Broadewell shows how desperate the situation is in Afghanistan. This site is engaged in truth supression.
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